I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
Mara Pryce lived a normal life up until Theodore appears. And then her whole life changes. Mara is what is known as an enchanter, and currently, a war between good and evil is raging. The evil-the Iniquitous-want her dead, and it is Theo’s job to protect her. A story of forbidden love, Theo and Mara both struggle with their feelings for each other and the knowledge that they are not to be together. With the threat of the Iniquitous looming on the horizon, they are running out of time to prepare. And the danger may turn out to be a lot closer than it seems.
I’m going to start by saying that I enjoyed this book more than I thought I would. I became invested in the characters and the story, and am actually sad that there is not a second one all ready and waiting for me to read right away. I think I have a huge weakness for protector stories.
So what elements did I not like? First of all, Mara is referred to as a ‘Chosen One’. Apparently there are more than on in this world, which is a change, but the idea of a chosen one is an overdone idea. If the idea is to be used, I think forgoing the name ‘chosen one’ would be best. But that is only my opinion. There is also the mean girl and beautiful teacher than one finds in almost any story that has anything to do with school, those these elements didn’t bother me as much. I did find the mean girl’s part in the story to be unnecessary, and it would have been the same story if she had not been in it at all.
I also found the dialogue to be cheesy and unrealistic. There would be lines I would read, and then I would have to pause and go, “Wait, how old are these people again? What century are we in?” I just felt like conversation didn’t always flow naturally between characters, and that has a way of taking the reader out of the story.
I never understand forbidden love stories. Now, I’ve never been in love, but I just imagine if there’s a really good reason for a relationship to not happen, it shouldn’t be that hard to avoid it. But I’ve never been in such a situation, so what do I know?
Parts of the pacing were off. They would walk into a classroom and after a few lines, class was getting let out with no indication that more than five minutes have passed. And the ending, which the whole book was leading up to, felt a little rushed and chaotic. Again, it’s a rushed and chaotic moment in the book, so this is not necessarily a big issue, just something that I noticed.
Those things aside, as I said, I did enjoy reading this book. I read this book in two days, which is pretty fast for me. I found myself invested in the characters, and I wanted to learn what was going to happen to them. And despite my reservations on forbidden love, I did enjoy watching Mara and Theo’s relationship grow. I look forward to the next installment of this series to continue these characters’ stories.
I give it 3/5 stars.
Enchanted was published on November 17, 2017.